It's very simplistic which caught my eye. I like how you made it a stick figure from the "o" and it's holding the plate of chili. Though everything looks good, I'm a little confused with the line at the bottom. Is it text or just line art? It looks a little out of place. Also watch the centering of page, it's a aligned slightly to the left.
Friday, March 20, 2009
Chili Layout Critique
It's very simplistic which caught my eye. I like how you made it a stick figure from the "o" and it's holding the plate of chili. Though everything looks good, I'm a little confused with the line at the bottom. Is it text or just line art? It looks a little out of place. Also watch the centering of page, it's a aligned slightly to the left.
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Thanks for your comment :). It is really helpful for me.
ReplyDeleteThe line at the bottom is a text. It will be "Proceeds to Heifer International...."
and.. do you think i should remove the right hand so the text won't be left aligned?
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