Wednesday, September 30, 2009

VisComII: People on Baitshop Walls


Next 2-page spread. Things to change: 'guys' to people(maybe) in the title to a wider audience and not just men. I need to COB my fishing lure images better...and any other suggestions Rusty?

Second layout: I added the logo, changed the title, and made the image of the fishing lures slightly smaller. Time so far, a little over an hour. I still need to edit the lures image, but I haven't had time to fix that part yet, decrease shadow on headline, move logo, and whatever is the 'nasty' factor will be.

Final layout. I changed the image, fixed the headline drop shadow, moved the logo, and finally COB'd the fishing lures image.

3 comments:

  1. It is looking structurally sound. The COB on the lure does need work. Still needs some visual nuances to ad the kick-butt factor to it. Where's your logo? This is an ad. Clients paying for ads tend to like to see their logos. You have a funky tab on the right column of text.

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  2. Read your copy. You have sub-heads and things to do. You still have my little (dingbats) notes in the copy.

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  3. Did you loose the logo? It was on a couple of the previous ones. Get it back in.

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